Welcome baldygreg, and I enjoyed your composition, and love of the Lord will produce music pleasing to Him. Make God the center of what you're doing and not you, and He will bring the success of your work to fruition.
With your styling I was thinking of the haunting sound of an Irish violin softly playing the original music in the background modified to the timing you present your music, I think it would work.
Above all, thanks for not having a girly man dressed in a skirt playing a bagpipe. Welcome to Grace Centered Christian Forums in Jesus' name.